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    dots Submission Name: What Happeneddots
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    Author: Rubesangel
    ASL Info:    16/female/ LehighAcers Fl
    Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 8/13/25
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 540
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    dotsWhat Happeneddots
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    What happened to our love?
    It used to be so bright
    Loving, laughing, caring
    Then soon caught the night
    You were my one and only love
    Cared for you too much
    Then something happened
    And slept with that girl
    You deceived me
    I never felt so desperate
    But I try to forgive you now
    And try not to think about before
    I love you so much
    It just hurts to ponder now
    Everything I have
    Is because of you
    Everything I bought
    Was because of you
    I just love you so much
    I'm scared to lose you




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