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    dots Submission Name: Why i believedots

    Author: Rubesangel
    ASL Info:    16/female/ LehighAcers Fl
    Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 8/13/25
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsWhy i believedots

    I thought I must give up on life
    And turn into a stone;
    The desert wind quite suited me:
    No heart, no mind--just bone.
    I thought it would be dumb to try
    To want something again;
    Wanting turns to need, and then
    Transmogrifies to pain.
    I laughed at people still in love
    Who trusted someone's word;
    To make my happiness depend
    On faith seemed quite absurd.
    I lay alone and wonder-struck,
    Sleepless in my bed,
    Still numb, still dumb, still ice, ice cold,
    Not knowing I was dead.
    And then you came and shone upon
    My meadow full of snow,
    And saw the flowers only love
    Could recognize and grow;
    And made me feel so beautiful
    I shed my cold, cold skin,
    And opened up my heart to you,
    And, fearful, let you in.
    And now, my dear, I am in love,
    With all that I've been through.
    I know the worst of all the world,
    And I believe in you.

    Submitted on 2009-04-27 13:36:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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