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    dots Submission Name: NEVERdots
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    Author: Rubesangel
    ASL Info:    16/female/ LehighAcers Fl
    Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 8/13/25
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 698
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsNEVERdots
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    You made me cry...
    You tore me apart..
    You left me in tears..
    You've shattered my heart..
    It wasn't your fault..
    I guess it was me..
    for love can't be forced..
    Perhaps we weren't meant to be..
    It still doesn't help..
    now that i know..
    Because for some reason..
    my heart won't let go..
    I've tried more than once..
    to get over you..
    but you make it so hard..
    with cute things you do..
    I thought love was joy..
    but i've got nothing to gain..
    just sorrows..,tears..
    and a little more pain..
    The day the pain started ..
    reality came too..
    It was the day i realized ..
    ......I'LL NEVER BE WITH YOU.......




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