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    dots Submission Name: I am dots
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    Author: PrettyHeart
    ASL Info:    39
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/55/53
    Words: 335
    Class/Type: Misc/Venting
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    dotsI am dots
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    I am a woman, I am a girl, and I am a daughter.
    I am man, I am a boy, and I am a son.
    I am a grandmother, I am daughter, and I am a wife.
    I am a grandfather, I am a son, and I am a husband.
    I have white skin; I have brown skin.
    I have blue eyes, I have green eyes, and I have brown eyes.
    I am a human.

    I work in a pizza shop, I work in a grocery store, and I work in a bar.
    I fix your car, I cut your hair, and I mend your clothes.
    I sell you roses from a street corner; I make your coffee in the morning.
    I sell movie tickets, and I sell you the soda and popcorn.
    I have white skin; I have brown skin.
    I have blue eyes, I have green eyes, and I have brown eyes.
    I am a human.

    You are a woman, you are a girl, and you are a daughter.
    You are man, you are a boy, and you are a son.
    You are a grandmother, you are daughter, and you are a wife.
    You are a grandfather, you are a son, and you are a husband.
    You have white skin; you have brown skin.
    You have blue eyes, you have green eyes, and you have brown eyes.
    You are a human.

    You own the pizza shop, you own the grocery store, and you own the bar.
    You drive that fancy car, you style your hair weekly, and you throw away clothes.
    You laugh at my roses as you pass my corner; you spend too much on your coffee.
    You’re in the movies, and you no longer drink soda or eat popcorn at the movies.
    You have white skin; you have brown skin.
    You have blue eyes, you have green eyes, and you have brown eyes.
    You still are a human.




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    ||| Comments |||
      i am....and ...you are

    we are what we are but we are all important no matter what we are...

    all humans...all matter...we matter.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-05-26 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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