Drina

Author: JoJoCrab Elite Ratio:    1.06 - 338 /113 /129 Words: 105

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Drina

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Dear Drina, You awaken me with a smile Knowing you are there An untie heart and a caring character Causing your warmth to sooth as a cup of tea Inclined by your metal waves I encountered philosophy dramatic piece An animation of do's and don't Acquainted barriers you bestowed upon me Untrained by your actions Showing interest and well being A disoriented heart, I felt Vanquish my energy, I am no more Your inflexible passion, Casanova

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