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    dots Submission Name: petalsdots

    Author: Maverique
    ASL Info:    25/F/Own little world
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 438/478/128
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    promises petal on your lips
    scenting thickly of hope

    and I, gullible butterfly that I am
    drink the nectar in

    {too fast}

    only to choke on disappointment

    {too late}

    this, your poison:
    the sweetness of insincerity

    Submitted on 2009-04-29 00:23:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is excellent! Part of the human quest is to seek eternally for a soulmate, and it leads us to seek love sometimes in the wrong places and look for it in the wrong faces!

    We are sometimes like the medicine man seeking to find new medicine, and biting into a strange root or plant; the result is that we come away smiling having found a panacea with healing results, or more often, spitting out a bitter taste and feeling gullible for having bitten into it in the first place!
    | Posted on 2009-12-31 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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