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    dots Submission Name: Front of my eyesdots
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    Author: Lilyan
    ASL Info:    1 Elite Years
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 42/38/26
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFront of my eyesdots
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    I lay in bed
    and close my eyes
    I observe and..
    listen
    the
    instantaneous duskiness.

    When abruptly
    lily-white dots
    arise..
    and fade away.
    Constantly.
    as if eternally.

    But no..

    Quite the contrary..
    Different bright colors
    arise and radiate happiness
    And dazzling me..
    I smile cheerfuly.

    No..!
    It dissapears..
    I wait for a moment.
    Yet darkness returns.
    And I open these
    sleepy eyes.




    Submitted on 2009-04-29 11:02:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is the truth as it stands!
    this blew me away for two reasons 1 i feel not only does your wording lead gently through causing a theraputic aura but 2 I find most of my inspiration at that moment yet i would never have thought of writing about it!
    miggy
    | Posted on 2009-04-29 00:00:00 | by miggy | [ Reply to This ]


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