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    dots Submission Name: Kerstinadots
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    Author: JoJoCrab
    Elite Ratio:    1.06 - 338/113/129
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsKerstinadots
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    A mischievous mistress
    Land of loving peacefulness
    A sweet surrendering sound
    Knowing what is true, but honor what is right
    Only she can be a matron's affair
    Trailing with soft amazing footprints
    No evidence contend, but a justify mirage
    Dazzling is her beauty and wits
    She desire any man who valor her soul
    A stability in spirit and willingness
    Revise her heart with ripen lyrics
    Towards the womanhood inside
    Conquest is the engagement
    Migrating is her way to unite
    Reconcile a beauty forthcoming




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