Kerstina

Author: JoJoCrab Elite Ratio:    1.06 - 338 /113 /129 Words: 84

Class/Type: Poetry /Longing Total Views: 1022 Average Vote:    No vote yet. Bytes: 608

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Kerstina

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A mischievous mistress Land of loving peacefulness A sweet surrendering sound Knowing what is true, but honor what is right Only she can be a matron's affair Trailing with soft amazing footprints No evidence contend, but a justify mirage Dazzling is her beauty and wits She desire any man who valor her soul A stability in spirit and willingness Revise her heart with ripen lyrics Towards the womanhood inside Conquest is the engagement Migrating is her way to unite Reconcile a beauty forthcoming

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