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    dots Submission Name: the worlddots
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    Author: cor
    ASL Info:    16/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.28 - 28/24/30
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 85
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    Bytes: 564



    Description:
       i had my reasons


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    dotsthe worlddots
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    Take a look in the mirror
    and grab your hand
    Lead the way
    and open your eyes
    see the world
    and the people around you
    Take nothing for granted
    and appreciate all you see
    clear your mind
    and know your greatest gift
    that gift to live free
    and think for yourself
    learn to love
    and forget to hate
    wonder about the world
    and begin your life
    make your best of friends
    and lose all your enemies
    chose your own path
    and live your life happy




    Submitted on 2009-04-30 13:11:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      If everyone followed these [guidlines] we would all be in a better place. I have read similar works before but found myself thinking you must be a lovely person!

    | Posted on 2009-05-04 00:00:00 | by miggy | [ Reply to This ]
      the world in your mind nust be the best place to live.love however finds your world.atleast my love does.i think u mmight be pushing the happy-go-sappy thing a little but thats u and that makes u awsome.again.
    | Posted on 2009-04-30 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]


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