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Submission Name:
Reasonable
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Author:
cor
ASL Info:
16/M/NY
Elite Ratio:
2.28 - 28/24/30
Words:
143
Class/Type:
Poetry/Misc
Total Views:
62
Average Vote:
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Description:
Reasonable
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There are certain people
that try to give reason to everything
they think all is logical
they say knowledge is power
but what happens when
you find something unexplainable
such as love, or even our creation
then what happens to that power?
when something exists
but we cant prove it
or if something should be there
but it isnt?
or even when
lies become truth
and the truth becomes a lie
what do we do then?
we continue on
as we always have
well still try to figure things out
or prove somethings real
this is our undoing
this is proof of our mortality
of our limited knowledge
of our certain doom
but of course that is humankind
the species that is unreasonable
the price we pay
for the ability to think freely
Submitted on 2009-04-30 13:59:34
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i like it.it reminds me of my poem"falling into foes".it dark but confusing.smart but districting.icy but deep.i love it.so incredible written.u got my seal of AWSOME.u got talent.i shall name "deepness".jk.but u r good.
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