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    dots Submission Name: Reasonabledots
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    Author: cor
    ASL Info:    16/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.28 - 28/24/30
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 62
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsReasonabledots
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    There are certain people
    that try to give reason to everything
    they think all is logical
    they say knowledge is power

    but what happens when
    you find something unexplainable
    such as love, or even our creation
    then what happens to that power?

    when something exists
    but we cant prove it
    or if something should be there
    but it isnt?

    or even when
    lies become truth
    and the truth becomes a lie
    what do we do then?

    we continue on
    as we always have
    well still try to figure things out
    or prove somethings real

    this is our undoing
    this is proof of our mortality
    of our limited knowledge
    of our certain doom

    but of course that is humankind
    the species that is unreasonable
    the price we pay
    for the ability to think freely




    Submitted on 2009-04-30 13:59:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like it.it reminds me of my poem"falling into foes".it dark but confusing.smart but districting.icy but deep.i love it.so incredible written.u got my seal of AWSOME.u got talent.i shall name "deepness".jk.but u r good.
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