Am I Really? by Shadowstar13

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Author:	Shadowstar13
Elite Ratio:	5.22 - 170/140/103
Words:	74

Class/Type:	Poetry/Mirror or Mask
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Am I Really? dots

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Am I really what you see
If you ever look at me?

In the violet light you bask
Can't you just see through my mask?

Do you even realize
What you claim not to despise?

Would you recognize a trace
If it stared you in the face?

Am I really an enemy
One who's cloaked in amnity?

"Perfect" I can never be
This simple truth can you not see?

Submitted on 2009-05-01 21:12:16 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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A great piece good flow a jewel a tresure. I like the last satnza best, you did a great job!
| Posted on 2009-05-02 00:00:00 | by Doublefeather | [ Reply to This ]

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