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    dots Submission Name: Am I Really?dots
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    Author: Shadowstar13
    Elite Ratio:    4.73 - 191/191/129
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Mirror or Mask
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    dotsAm I Really?dots
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    Am I really what you see
    If you ever look at me?

    In the violet light you bask
    Can't you just see through my mask?

    Do you even realize
    What you claim not to despise?

    Would you recognize a trace
    If it stared you in the face?

    Am I really an enemy
    One who's cloaked in amnity?

    "Perfect" I can never be
    This simple truth can you not see?




    Submitted on 2009-05-01 21:12:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A great piece good flow a jewel a tresure. I like the last satnza best, you did a great job!
    | Posted on 2009-05-02 00:00:00 | by Doublefeather | [ Reply to This ]


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