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    dots Submission Name: mirrordots
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    Author: teekie
    ASL Info:    18/f/ma
    Elite Ratio:    1.12 - 5/27/21
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 667
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 646



    Description:
       something i wrote the other day kinda weird lol but tell me wat you think


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    dots mirrordots
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    I look in the mirror
    and what do i see
    someone else
    starring back at me

    What do you do
    when you start to lose
    the person you truly are
    and the person you see
    is now a mystery

    She looks and acts something like me
    but the secret she holds
    none else can see

    So the person in the mirror
    is much more stronger then me
    her face stays a smile
    and her feelings you do not see

    The question is
    how do i become
    the person you see
    when the person in the mirror
    is trapped inside me




    Submitted on 2009-05-02 07:17:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      love it.
    | Posted on 2009-05-05 00:00:00 | by SamiScream | [ Reply to This ]
      wow... you sure did a lot of thinking to write this one, i feel... made me think a lot too.. its very very good...
    | Posted on 2009-05-03 00:00:00 | by rsujith | [ Reply to This ]


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