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Submission Name: mirror dots

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Author:	teekie
ASL Info:	18/f/ma
Elite Ratio:	1.12 - 5/27/21
Words:	109

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	667
Average Vote:	4.0000
Bytes:	646

Description:
something i wrote the other day kinda weird lol but tell me wat you think

mirror

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I look in the mirror
and what do i see
someone else
starring back at me

What do you do
when you start to lose
the person you truly are
and the person you see
is now a mystery

She looks and acts something like me
but the secret she holds
none else can see

So the person in the mirror
is much more stronger then me
her face stays a smile
and her feelings you do not see

The question is
how do i become
the person you see
when the person in the mirror
is trapped inside me

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love it.
| Posted on 2009-05-05 00:00:00 | by SamiScream | [ Reply to This ]
wow... you sure did a lot of thinking to write this one, i feel... made me think a lot too.. its very very good...
| Posted on 2009-05-03 00:00:00 | by rsujith | [ Reply to This ]

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