[
Join Free!
]
(No Spam mail)
RolePlay
Join Us
Writings
Shoutbox
Community
Digg Mashup
Mp3 Search
Online Education
My Youtube
Ear Training
Funny Pics
Role Play
Piano Music
Free Videos
Web 2.0
<<
|
>>
Submission Name:
mirror
--------------------------------------------------------
Author:
teekie
ASL Info:
18/f/ma
Elite Ratio:
1.12 - 5/27/21
Words:
109
Class/Type:
Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:
939
Average Vote:
4.0000
Bytes:
646
Description:
something i wrote the other day kinda weird lol but tell me wat you think
mirror
-------------------------------------------
I look in the mirror
and what do i see
someone else
starring back at me
What do you do
when you start to lose
the person you truly are
and the person you see
is now a mystery
She looks and acts something like me
but the secret she holds
none else can see
So the person in the mirror
is much more stronger then me
her face stays a smile
and her feelings you do not see
The question is
how do i become
the person you see
when the person in the mirror
is trapped inside me
Submitted on 2009-05-02 07:17:32
Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Submissions: [
Previous
] [
Next
]
Rate This Submission
1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!
||| Comments |||
love it.
| Posted on 2009-05-05 00:00:00 | by
SamiScream
| [
Reply to This
]
wow... you sure did a lot of thinking to write this one, i feel... made me think a lot too.. its very very good...
| Posted on 2009-05-03 00:00:00 | by
rsujith
| [
Reply to This
]
Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [
Guidelines
]
1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?
173916
Jimmy Ruska
Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.
Enter your search terms
Submit search form
Web
www.eliteskills.com
Login
User Name:
Password:
[
Quick Signup
]
[
Lost Password
]
January 10 07
131,497 Poems
Posted
I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my
Video Tutorials
[
Angst Poetry
]
[
Cutters
]
[
Famous Poetry
]
[
Poetry Scams
]
FontSize:
[ Smaller ]
[ Bigger ]