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    dots Submission Name: An Ode To Stagnancydots
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    Author: SonOfDamascus
    ASL Info:    18/m/Maine
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 27/35/37
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsAn Ode To Stagnancydots
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    i will paint my masterpiece.
    leave it on the walls for the masses.
    and abandon it to destruction.
    you know who i am.
    that lowly drifter.
    that forgotten enigma.
    i sleep soundly knowing.
    that the world goes on without me.
    where i lay my head is home.





    Submitted on 2009-05-02 21:43:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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