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    dots Submission Name: he says words don't matterdots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    16 going on 17
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 174/201/192
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 96
    Average Vote:    4.2500
    Bytes: 431



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    dotshe says words don't matterdots
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    words mean the world
    the way that i see
    who i have heard
    what has made me.

    pictures capture feelings
    show emotions you can't hide
    grab at your senses
    fill memories in your mind

    together they make a moment
    can you read between the lines?
    show your true emotions
    the ones you'll never hide.








    Submitted on 2009-05-03 14:02:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hi
    | Posted on 2009-06-03 00:00:00 | by cstonehawkWya | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice sweetie. Words always matter. Words shape how we communicate with the world, only a dunce who has no control over their words would think otherwise.
    <3 sissy
    | Posted on 2009-05-04 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]
      wow...impressive, Squeakie!

    you have a masterful command of your words here.

    brilliant Princess, i adore you!

    love and kisses,
    hugz n misses,
    Mummie
    | Posted on 2009-05-04 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]


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