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    dots Submission Name: are you like me?dots
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    Author: joezwells
    Elite Ratio:    3.81 - 64/78/54
    Words: 216
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsare you like me?dots
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    have you ever felt like you cant speak?
    do your thoughts overwhelm you
    so much you cant find the answers you seek?
    have you ever wanted something so bad
    that it makes you feel sick
    it pushes you down a path that you didnt pick
    have you ever felt that you dont belong
    that you are alone and everything is wrong?
    have you ever tried to get away
    pushed aside everything
    but didnt realize the price you had to pay?
    have you ever just cried
    without knowing why
    you tried to explain but it was all a lie?
    have you ever pushed yourself so hard
    you fell apart
    couldnt figure out why you were dealt that card?
    have you ever wondered if you had a purpose
    searched for the answer
    and realized you werent worth it?
    have you lied in bed a night
    wondering why things happened
    and your future doesnt seem bright?
    have you ever wondered if there was someone like you
    who feels lost and like your whole world is coming ungled?
    if you have you are just like me
    feeling lost and anything but free
    life is hard and gets you down
    but it is whatever you make it out to be
    so please dont be like me




    Submitted on 2009-05-03 19:40:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow everything in this post someone can relate to at least one thing if not all of it! I think that always helps when people post things that others can relate to it helps the reader make a connection that otherwise wouldn't be there. Not that I don't like reading things I can't relate to but it just make it a bit better. Nevertheless this is a great write! Keep posting :)

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    | Posted on 2009-06-08 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
      This I totally get... it was wonderful... I've been there done that and i'm sure ithappens through out life... this is one of my favs
    | Posted on 2009-05-31 00:00:00 | by LisaGullion | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem has a nice flow and it forces the reader to think and analyse one's own life. Good writing, keep it up.
    | Posted on 2009-05-19 00:00:00 | by devil666 | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow I really liked this poem! I found that when I read this poem it teaches you a lesson but at the same time you can hear the feelings behind the lesson your teaching and that in itself is a very powerful thing. I also liked your structure and thought it flowed very nicely.
    | Posted on 2009-05-06 00:00:00 | by captureyourself | [ Reply to This ]


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