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    dots Submission Name: sobrietydots
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    Author: joezwells
    Elite Ratio:    3.81 - 64/78/54
    Words: 271
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       finally setting down all the drugs and alcohol. i wrote this a while ago right after i got sober. major turning point in my life. hope someone can get something form this.


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    dotssobrietydots
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    i lost my way and i cant be found
    im screaming but no one can hear a sound
    it wont be long before i drown in my thoughts
    before i let down someone just becuse i forgot
    i feel so low and i know somethings wrong
    these sleepless nights are way too long
    i keep thinking i will be okay
    but then all hope is blown away
    i dont know who i am cause i lost myself
    i pray no one feels what i have felt
    all of my pain has turned into fear
    i have pushed away everyone near
    i have no more tears left to cry
    i am freshly out of all the lies
    and i done creating new alibies
    slowly but surely i will find my way back
    dealing with emotions i once thought i lacked
    im trying to do what i know is right
    i know i dont have it in me to lose this fight
    my life just seems so hard to grasp
    killing myslef for all i did in the past
    if i go back i wont survive
    i dont want that girl to be revived
    i dont know who i am but willing to find out
    if you dont believe you have every right to doubt
    all the promises made and the words i spoke
    all of it was just a big joke
    i dont want to lie and hurt the ones i love
    i just want to get over this and rise above
    i chose a new road and theres no turning back
    im headed home i just have to pack




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      Wow...I can completely relate and understand. Each and every line speaks volumes! I left my certain someone (we were suppose to get married) to come back home to Ohio because I knew I needed to get away from the depression we feed off of one another as well as the drugs that help sooth the depression and loneliness. I know how it is to not know yourself, to feel you have lost yourself in your past actions. To be willing to do ANYTHING to give up ANYTHING to change our pasts to change the hurt we have caused... this my friends is one of the best write i've read in a long time

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    | Posted on 2009-06-08 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
      this poem is bad ass... i love the last few lines... can definitely relate whole heartedly to this... well done
    | Posted on 2009-05-28 00:00:00 | by LisaGullion | [ Reply to This ]


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