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    dots Submission Name: FREE LOVEdots
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    Author: clumsys
    ASL Info:    13/male/philippines
    Elite Ratio:    0.01 - 0/0/5
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 614
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 733



    Description:
       THIS IS A POEM ABOUT GAY RELATIONSHIPS...


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    dotsFREE LOVEdots
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    I DON'T CARE,IF WE'RE THE SAME
    THERE'S NO NEED AND NO ONE TO BLAME
    BE'COZ LOVE BIND US BY IT'S BURNING FLAME
    MAKING OUR HEARTS FIGHT FOR IT'S GOLDEN AIM
    OUR LOVE IS PURE AND FOR REAL
    BUT,THERE ARE SEVERAL OF PEOPLE WHO CANNOT FEEL
    OUR LOVE THAT SUSTAINS OUR HEARTS
    CRITICIZING AND ASKING "WHERE IT'S START"?
    AND IN THEIR RIGHTEOUS EYES IT'S TYPICALLY WRONG
    BUT I CAN FEEL AND HEAR THE SWEET MELODY OF A SONG
    A SONG THAT FULFILLED OUR HEARTS BY AN EVERLASTING HOPE
    EVEN THOU WE ARE ON MOST HIGHEST AND STEEPEST SLOPE...



    BY:JOHN PAUL M. NATIVIDAD




    Submitted on 2009-05-04 01:02:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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