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    dots Submission Name: Mariettadots
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    Author: JoJoCrab
    Elite Ratio:    1.06 - 338/113/129
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsMariettadots
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    A gentle wind
    On the ocean floor
    Memories of her
    Keepsake with honor
    A Peru woman
    Scented botanical soul
    An understudy with spirit
    Dancing unforgettable
    A performance she is
    Nearly out of place
    Portrait in motion
    For the arts
    Injured, I am
    A ballet of love
    Ending without our encore





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      Lovely read, it has a sultriness to it,

    A Peru woman
    Scented botanical soul
    An understudy with spirit
    Dancing unforgettable

    I loved the vision these lines gave me. However, I was thinking more Salsa than ballet, lol.
    | Posted on 2009-08-28 00:00:00 | by jezracrow | [ Reply to This ]
      coool read,

    great concepts...

    botanical soul, ballet of love..

    nice themes an what not..

    keep writing
    | Posted on 2009-08-21 00:00:00 | by SinCeer05 | [ Reply to This ]


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