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    dots Submission Name: Guardian dots
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    Author: Ashuri
    ASL Info:    15/f/the moon
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 13/37/17
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 61
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       Bored once again. Cranked it out, because of something that prompted me. It's eh...so go ahead and bash it.


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    dotsGuardian dots
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    Your very essence...
    It suffocates me.

    I can't comprehend light,
    When I've only lived in darkness.

    And yet you still stand there...
    By my side.

    Unobtrusive...

    Undemanding...

    Unassuming...

    And yet so unrelenting...

    When will you choose to leave?

    To let me go?

    To disappoint me like all those before you?

    Why do you choose to stay?

    To persist?

    When I will only disappoint you...




    Submitted on 2009-05-05 00:23:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Okay...it said nothing important to me about anything.I guess you dissapointed me.Was that the point?

    -Craig
    | Posted on 2009-05-05 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ]



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