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    dots Submission Name: Theory of Relativitydots
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    Author: vanhokinshtyl
    ASL Info:    8/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 119/200/71
    Words: 370
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 701
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2491



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    dotsTheory of Relativitydots
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    You just don't get it,
    and you'll never get it right,
    No matter how hard you try, you'll never understand,
    You gotta love somebody,
    But you only love yourself,
    You keep others on the shelf
    To settle in the dust like you...

    You just don't get it,
    And I don't think you want to,
    When you're the one who said it,
    But you blame it on others,
    And you keep expecting different results,
    When you test the same theory each time,
    You gotta love somebody
    To receive the result,
    And fail a thousand times just to succeed once,
    And who's to say you didn't find a thousand ways to improve?
    Yourself can only answer to you.

    You just don't get it,
    And you probably never will,
    You're too adamant to realize you need some guidance,
    You gotta love somebody,
    Don't just settle for yourself,
    When someone else could help,
    When you fail you'll understand that...

    You just don't get it,
    And I don't think you want to,
    When you're the one who said it,
    But you blame it on others,
    And you keep expecting different results,
    When you prove the same theory each time,
    You gotta love somebody
    To receive the result,
    And fail a thousand times just to succeed once,
    And who's to say you didn't find a thousand ways to improve?
    Yourself can only answer to you.

    I've felt lonely in a haze,
    Trapped inside this lab for days,
    There's no way out unless I crack the code of relativity,
    I know you have to relate as a rule,
    And basic math says 1+1=2,
    This universe is small without you...

    New discovery: Scientists found that you must love somebody else to know what you love about yourself, (Now...)

    You just don't get it,
    And I don't think you want to,
    When you're the one who said it,
    But you blame it on others,
    And you keep expecting different results,
    When you prove the same theory each time,
    You gotta love somebody
    To receive the result,
    And fail a thousand times just to succeed once,
    And who's to say you didn't find a thousand ways to improve?
    Yourself can only answer to you.




    Submitted on 2009-05-05 13:30:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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