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6 Months

Author: SamiScream
ASL Info:    16/F/SD
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Words: 97
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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A poem I wrote about my bestest friend

6 Months

6 months to go,
6 months of nothing to do.
6 months of boredom.
6 months without you.
6 months of no smoking
6 months of no drinking
6 months of no talking
You are gone for 6 months,
and now I'm sad and alone.
I have nothing to do,
no one to talk to, because
you are gone.
6 months of nothing
6 months without fun
6 months of silence
6 months of sadness
6 months you are gone
6 months I'll b alone
6 months, til you're out
I'll miss you, Jared,
My bestest friend.

Submitted on 2009-05-05 13:30:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  thats so awsum.i loved it.the rhyme scheme was awsum.poprox says awsum.
| Posted on 2009-05-05 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]

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