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    dots Submission Name: All I Know Is I Don't Knowdots
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    Author: vanhokinshtyl
    ASL Info:    8/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 119/200/71
    Words: 320
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 575
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1971



    Description:
       I don't know... smartest thing anyone's ever said.


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    dotsAll I Know Is I Don't Knowdots
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    I don't know what I know
    When all I know is I don't know anything at all
    The more you know
    The more you have to know to learn,
    I've learned that I haven't learned anything yet...
    And will I ever?


    I know that I should know better,
    But I don't when I question myself
    Cause I don't know,
    I could say help me
    But the more help that i get
    The more I fall into the undertow/just fall down...

    Who? What? When? Where? And why?
    The 5 "w's" appear in a clever disguise,
    I say I wanna dream,
    But it's so hard to dream when you live just to open your eyes
    To the mess we've made,
    Pick up all the trash just to realize it still remains,
    Why are you telling me, if I'm supposed to figure this out all by myself?

    I don't know what you wanna hear from me,
    When i hear I haven't heard anything at all,
    The more you hear, the more you must listen to learn,
    I've learned that I haven't learned anything at all
    And will I ever?

    I hear/know that I should listen better,
    But I don't when I question your voice,
    Cause I don't know,
    I could say help me
    But the more help that i get
    The more I fall into the undertow/just fall down...

    Who? What? When? Where? And why?
    The 5 "w's" appear in a clever disguise,
    I say I wanna dream,
    But it's so hard to dream when you live just to open your eyes
    To the mess we've made,
    Pick up all the trash just to realize it still remains,
    Why are you telling me, if I have to figure this out all by myself?

    Help me all by myself...

    Help me get through this world,
    I don't know if I can do it all by myself




    Submitted on 2009-05-05 13:53:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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