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    Author: Frank Maguire
    ASL Info:    52 / UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 1727/1248/246
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 91
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    The sweetest love is such a love
    That is deepest by degree
    The sweetest love is such a love
    That can never ever be

    The fairest maid is such a maid
    That is found without beseech
    The fairest maid is such a maid
    That is forever out of reach

    The fondest kiss is such a kiss
    That is lost when lovers part
    The fondest kiss is such a kiss
    That lives forever in the heart

    The truest word is such a word
    That is born from love divine
    The truest word is such a word
    That makes two hearts untwine






    Submitted on 2009-05-05 18:43:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very well written... it has a good flow and meaning to it...
    It takes you inside between the lines.

    Well, I would have written critique also, ... but I dont have anything negative to say about this work, :-)

    Both thumbs up.
    | Posted on 2009-08-03 00:00:00 | by Kwanying | [ Reply to This ]
      Yo!
    Mad skillz
    Mr Maguire.

    Makes me all lovity inside, it does.
    Nice one, bruva.

    Nice one.

    Cheers.
    | Posted on 2009-05-07 00:00:00 | by THESCHMEXYVAG | [ Reply to This ]
      Outstanding Frank, as all of your work is! Unrequited love is the most poetic, and it keeps us poets and writers busy. Nothing is quite so outstanding as "what might have been"!

    Delightful read!
    | Posted on 2009-05-06 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      This is so true. I almost cried when I read this. Love is never as true as when it can't happen... love that is meant to be yet can never be is always the sweetest. You have hit a chord. This is a novel idea, yet it makes so much sense. I never would've thought to put it into words like that but the minute you wrote it it was crystal clear. Sorry this isn't really a critique! Thank you for writing this.
    | Posted on 2009-05-06 00:00:00 | by The Conqueror | [ Reply to This ]


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