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    dots Submission Name: The Blessingdots
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    Author: The Gadfly
    ASL Info:    52/M/Moreno Valley, CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 1048/1348/375
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 648
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 269



    Description:
       A Nonet poem; nine lines in progressive syllable count from one to nine.


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    dotsThe Blessingdots
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    It
    did not
    come to me
    as I supposed.
    Unexpectedly,
    it fell into my hands,
    having passed through someone else,
    anonymously at my door,
    the blessing God left for me to find.



    The Gadfly




    Submitted on 2009-05-07 02:17:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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