A Reason to Finish

Author: PhantomRose ASL Info:    19/F/Illinois Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 43 /58 /35 Words: 99

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A Reason to Finish

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Your beauty I see However odd you may be, So gentle you feel And, this magic, it's real. Your heart softens my own And my love, it has grown. In your eyes I see love More than I have ever dreamt of. With your lips you plant that kiss That makes my mind explode with bliss. With your arms you hold me close And make my life not so morose. With you I can't be sad And what we do doesn't seem so bad. So love me one more time And give me a reason to finish this rhyme.

Submitted on 2009-05-07 21:17:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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good job! =]

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