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A Reason to Finish

Author: PhantomRose
ASL Info:    19/F/Illinois
Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 43 /58 /35
Words: 99
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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A Reason to Finish

Your beauty I see
However odd you may be,
So gentle you feel
And, this magic, it's real.
Your heart softens my own
And my love, it has grown.
In your eyes I see love
More than I have ever dreamt of.
With your lips you plant that kiss
That makes my mind explode with bliss.
With your arms you hold me close
And make my life not so morose.
With you I can't be sad
And what we do doesn't seem so bad.
So love me one more time
And give me a reason to finish this rhyme.

Submitted on 2009-05-07 21:17:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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