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    dots Submission Name: A Reason to Finishdots
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    Author: PhantomRose
    ASL Info:    19/F/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 43/58/35
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 498
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    dotsA Reason to Finishdots
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    Your beauty I see
    However odd you may be,
    So gentle you feel
    And, this magic, it's real.
    Your heart softens my own
    And my love, it has grown.
    In your eyes I see love
    More than I have ever dreamt of.
    With your lips you plant that kiss
    That makes my mind explode with bliss.
    With your arms you hold me close
    And make my life not so morose.
    With you I can't be sad
    And what we do doesn't seem so bad.
    So love me one more time
    And give me a reason to finish this rhyme.




    Submitted on 2009-05-07 21:17:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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