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Author: joezwells
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Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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this is about a very close friend of mine who hasnt had the best relationships in the past. im trying to tell her to finally step up and take what she wants out of a relationship becuase she is so sweet she gives too much. step up girl take control of this one you know you can!


stop! your letting him do this
think you owe him? it was just a kiss
dont give in, he will realize what he missed
dont over look facts that cant be dismissed

you want this to work
but dont give up who you are
he has his opinion
but he can only take it so far
has he forgotten that fisrt night
you ended up in the back of his car

no judgment on you
but does he have a clue
obviously your drinking impairs you
so one drunk kiss makes him come unglued
he is the one who made the mistake...he already knew

you take the upper hand
your strong enough to do so
if he doesnt listen his ass is canned
you know what you want and know how to get it
you owe it to yourself to finally take a stand

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