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    dots Submission Name: Gangsta lifedots
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    Author: devil666
    ASL Info:    26/M/NewHampshire
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 9/50/38
    Words: 243
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 713
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    dotsGangsta lifedots
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    IN THE MOOD FOR REVENGE I STEP OUT WITH MY SEMIAUTOMATIC,
    INVADE THE SNITCH'S HOME AND PULL HIM OUT OF THE ATTIC.
    FOR EVERYONE WATCHING EVERYTHING WAS SO DRAMATIC,
    HAD ENOUGH OF BULLSHIT, SO NOW THAT WAS IT.

    THREE BULLETS STRAIGHT TO THE BRAZEN HEAD,
    MOTIONLESS ON THE FLOOR, BASTARD LAY DEAD.
    KICKED HIS DUMMYASS HEAD WITH MY STEELBOOTS,
    GUN IS MY REMOTE CONTROL, THATS HOW I PRESS MUTE.

    MY MOTHER WATCHED GODFATHER WHEN SHE WAS PREGNANT,
    SO I MOVE AROUND WITH A GAT KILLIN WITH NO REPENTENCE.
    GIVE DEATH SENTENCE TO BASTARDS WITHOUT NO HEARING,
    JUST BEFORE DEATH THEY CRY, HOWL AND ALL THE PLEADING.

    BUT I AM A MERCILESS MOTHERFUCKER WITH A GUN IN MY HAND,
    LIKE THE ANGEL OF DEATH WALKIN WITH A MAGIC WAND.
    I'LL FUCK YOU UPSIDE DOWN LIKE A FUCKIN HANDSTAND,
    OUT IN THE STREETS I DONT TALK, ALL I DO IS GANGBANG.

    STRAPPED WITH A GUN AND A VEST LIKE I WAS BORN WITH IT,
    MY STRENGTH INCREASES TENFOLD WHEN I LEAVE THROATS SLIT,
    JUST BEFORE THE ATTACK I CHOOSE A KNIFE FROM THE KIT,
    KILLING IS AN ART LIKE A COOKING, I ENJOY EVERY BIT.

    YOU WERE DESTINED TO DIE, CUZ THAT IS YOUR FATE,
    BORN TO HATE, IM THE NEW ALEXANDER THE GREAT.
    I LIVE BY THE BULLET AND DONT MIND DYING BY ONE ,
    YOU DONT WANNA FUCKK WITH CUZ IM A SONOVAGUN.






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