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    dots Submission Name: Teachers and Teenagers.dots
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    Author: devil666
    ASL Info:    26/M/NewHampshire
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 9/50/38
    Words: 168
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsTeachers and Teenagers.dots
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    IN THE 8TH GRADE THIS SHY AND QUIET TEENAGER,
    NEW TO PORNOGRAPHY, CELLPHONES AND PAGERS.
    ELORING NEW CHANGES IN HIS DEVELOPING BODY,
    TEACHERS PICKED ON HIM FOR BEING SO NAUGHTY.

    MORE TESTOSTORONE, HE COULDNT TAKE IT THAT FAST,
    STARING AT BIG BREASTS AND TOUCHING A GIRL'S ASS.
    FAILING TO DO HOMEWORK, THROWN OUT WITH HIS BAG.
    BULLIED BY FELLOW STUDENTS HE WENT REAL MAD.

    FAILED HIS EXAMS, IT WAS LACK OF PREPARATION,
    AT HOME ALL HE DID IS INDULGE IN MASTURBATION.
    TEACHERS RIDICULING, CALLING HIM MENTALLY INSANE,
    ALWAYS SLAPPING AND USING THE ROD OR THE CANE.

    LABELLED HIM A BAD INFLUENCE, HE WAS THEN IGNORED,
    WHEN CONFRONTED, THE BOY RETALIATED AND OPPOSED.
    HARSH TREATMENT AFFECTED HIS BRAIN AT A TENDER AGE.
    NOW HEZ FULL OF HATRED, ANGST AND MAD RAGE.

    A MENACE TO THE SOCIETY NOW HE'S MOST HATED,
    INDULGING IN VIOLENCE, BLOODSHED, HIS YOUTH WASTED.
    SO SPARE THE ROD AND PLEASE SAVE THE CHILD,
    ITS KINDNESS AND LOVE BRINGS WARMTH AND SMILES.




    Submitted on 2009-05-10 05:35:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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