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    dots Submission Name: do you?dots

    Author: blackdemigod13
    Elite Ratio:    1.52 - 56/60/41
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsdo you?dots

    do you know what it feels like to be hurt
    no you don't noone ever called you dirt.
    they never said you were fat,
    never called you a ugly bat.
    so go ahead and live your perfect life,
    while people stab your friends with knives.

    Submitted on 2009-05-10 20:57:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can feel the emotions in this small poem. I have been there know what you mean
    | Posted on 2011-11-04 00:00:00 | by janekostman09 | [ Reply to This ]
      I know what it's like for someone to make fun of you all the time. It's not the best feeling in the world. I hate it, actually. But, you've just got to learn how to pick yourself up and ignore the idiots who make your life miserable.
    | Posted on 2009-05-11 00:00:00 | by bubble_popper15 | [ Reply to This ]

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