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do you?


Author: blackdemigod13
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do you?



do you know what it feels like to be hurt
no you don't noone ever called you dirt.
they never said you were fat,
never called you a ugly bat.
so go ahead and live your perfect life,
while people stab your friends with knives.




Submitted on 2009-05-10 20:57:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I can feel the emotions in this small poem. I have been there know what you mean
| Posted on 2011-11-04 00:00:00 | by janekostman09 | [ Reply to This ]
  I know what it's like for someone to make fun of you all the time. It's not the best feeling in the world. I hate it, actually. But, you've just got to learn how to pick yourself up and ignore the idiots who make your life miserable.
Angel
| Posted on 2009-05-11 00:00:00 | by bubble_popper15 | [ Reply to This ]


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