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    dots Submission Name: Waltz Whisperdots
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    Author: FallenAngelJC
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 47/53/41
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 48
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 618



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    dotsWaltz Whisperdots
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    Take my hand, do not fear my dear
    For it is our waltz into the endless night
    Our hall, the moonlit sky
    Our stage, the embracing clouds
    Our audience, the diamond stars themselves...

    A quick twirl and a step, our dance begins
    Nobody more beautiful to me
    No one more dazzling to my eyes
    If there exist the perfect moment
    It would be now, stolen from father time...

    I can hear you willing to whisper,
    "I love you"
    Hush my dear, because I will whisper
    "I love you"
    Always First And Last...




    Submitted on 2009-05-10 22:37:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love the feel of this it has a quietness and a hush to it before you even read the words hush and whisper...I love the setting, the image of the sky being your hallway and the stars the audience..beautifully written..very descriptive...
    | Posted on 2009-05-12 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]
      Thank you for bringing back a calm in my heart~
    | Posted on 2009-05-11 00:00:00 | by arodase | [ Reply to This ]



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