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    dots Submission Name: Everythingdots
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    Author: newcancer
    Elite Ratio:    4.2 - 7/8/28
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 573
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       By the way, this is put up on deviantart.com also, but I am the same person who wrote it
    So, most of my poems would be on other sites more then here, so just to make sure you don't get confused ;

    This is a meaningful poem to me. Nothing is what people accept as nothing, as in there is no such thing of something.
    Yet maybe nothing is our excuse for these things. Haven't you ever wondered about the things you never achieved or that you never understood? In this poem, that is what nothing stands for- everything.

    Though it might mean something else to someone else. Just enjoy :)


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    dotsEverythingdots
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    nothing is nothing

    nothing is the breeze

    nothing is everything

    that cannot be seen.



    nothing is the window

    nothing is the dust

    nothing is the gap

    between the maybes and musts.



    nothing is the gleam

    nothing is the glance

    nothing is the thing

    that you can never grasp.



    nothing is the grass

    nothing is the trees

    nothing is the prayer

    which is said when on your knees.



    Yet we cannot see nothing

    For nothing is a call

    Nothing is the loss

    Of nothing at all.




    Submitted on 2009-05-11 05:11:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I also like it..
    Its very true.
    | Posted on 2009-06-15 00:00:00 | by GrIm:)ReApEr | [ Reply to This ]
      this in a weird way is actually very good... It set really odd but i liked it... I'm not sire what else to say but well done
    | Posted on 2009-06-14 00:00:00 | by LisaGullion | [ Reply to This ]


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