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    dots Submission Name: smiledots
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    Author: cha
    Elite Ratio:    2.3 - 37/28/31
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotssmiledots
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    A smile is misplaced.
    to walk with a blank face,

    is to bare an empty soul.
    A heart is but a hole,

    no expression anymore,
    a body is tore.

    All this from one case,
    a smile that's been misplaced




    Submitted on 2009-05-11 12:05:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Its short and nice, i like that. This morning i was thinking about writing something like this but a little difference. like with using anger and all the bad emotions and getting rid of them.
    the opinion that once you loose a smile then "no expression anymore,", is really intersting. its as if things run on happiness.

    Fana
    Good Write!
    | Posted on 2009-05-12 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]


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