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    dots Submission Name: The Beach Boys Kama Sutra Body Slam of Love...yeahdots
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    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    58/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2779/1297/258
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Misc
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       O debt, where is my bling?


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    dotsThe Beach Boys Kama Sutra Body Slam of Love...yeahdots
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    The Beach Boys Kama Sutra Body Slam of Love...yeah

    My baby, wrestles in the ring
    My baby, she’s the sweetest thing
    She’s as pretty as a rose
    if you disagree she’ll smash your nose...

    A buh-back breaker, sh’e a back breaker
    A buh-back breaker, she’s a backbreaker
    Her Daddy is a midwest undertaker

    Hoo-oo-oo-oo
    Thatsa why he’s rolling in doh...




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      ComPLETELY Delightful!
    It's funny as hell, I don't see much dark to it. But I'm twisted... this is what sunshine looks like to me.
    | Posted on 2009-10-02 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      Putlamali singalie tretretre

    or translated into english




    3 puntboys sniffing ass
    close enough to get a taste
    should not expect a peppermint
    or make a screwed up face.

    | Posted on 2009-05-24 00:00:00 | by InNoMood44Play | [ Reply to This ]
      She's the hottest bouncer in the land
    You'll need traction if you hold her ha-hand
    Her last boyfriend tried to slip a kiss
    Now he needs a shovel to separate his lips

    ...yeah...
    | Posted on 2009-05-12 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      probably missing the point here, but anyway...

    on first read it's light and fun and then i started putting pieces together or, making pieces to put together and then calling it a puzzle... either way i got the feeling there's real bitterness here.

    and I have the feeling this is an economic poem but fuc k that. I like talking about girls. Girls rock.

    Except with life being such a cluster, and me being something of a romantic or straight laced whathaveyou
    and with love or even a decent relationship being so hard to come by for most ppl:

    I hate the idea of groupies and suga daddies and all and sundry.

    So yeah, i liked this on both levels.
    | Posted on 2009-05-12 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]


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