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    dots Submission Name: Song for usdots
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    Author: LiChan
    ASL Info:    18/f/in my reality
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 9/6/12
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSong for usdots
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    Canít you see
    The demons within me
    I will run and hide from you
    To keep them from your view

    So breathe in deep as you look
    Past the thoughts of another time
    Quiet ponderings you will have
    When I have been long and passed

    My footprints will fade with the night
    Hiden within the shining light
    And when you awake to find me gone
    Just take care to remember that song

    Of summer winds and atume leaves
    Kindered folk hiding with in our trees
    Of winter fires and spring needs
    Of the thoughts we planted as seeds.




    Submitted on 2009-05-12 12:17:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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