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    dots Submission Name: upon meeting a giantdots
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    Author: Beulah
    Elite Ratio:    4.78 - 588/414/44
    Words: 26
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 779
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsupon meeting a giantdots
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    are you amazed
    at the
    intricate web
    I've woven

    carefully ensuring
    calmness
    perfection
    and grace

    to hide
    the turmoil
    behind my
    steady gaze




    Submitted on 2009-05-13 08:39:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      And it is an INTRICATE one!!

    great !
    | Posted on 2009-06-28 00:00:00 | by Sadoun | [ Reply to This ]
      So i guess you plan to trap your giant oh nimble spider...:) Provokes thought thought without the title i would have never come up with that conclusion. Pretty kool
    | Posted on 2009-05-13 00:00:00 | by Petals | [ Reply to This ]
      How the [censored] do you do that?! Case you don't understand I read your other jawn (in this case "jawn" means "poem") before this one. I remember the two seconds reading the title before I clicked on it to read the poem thinking "isn't it ironic that this persons titled one of their poems 'Upon Meeting A Giant' when the actual poem ain't goin to be much bigger than a sentence?" But anyway, same affect as before...I just don't understand....but hey, concision works for you.

    SPIT FROM YOUR SPINE
    red
    | Posted on 2009-05-13 00:00:00 | by red_summer | [ Reply to This ]


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