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    dots Submission Name: impossiblismixdots
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    Author: sickly
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 545/537/203
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Gothic
    Total Views: 990
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       this is my entry in the lulu.poetry contest that has as the prize, $5,000.you be the judge.can it win?i'll patiently await the result either way being that i win by daring to.boo!


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    dotsimpossiblismixdots
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    dead and forgotten, rock bottomed
    death disappears wishestly wildened
    in undying photograph life sentence
    i did a snafu screw you too night
    bad and blue, hitleryouth alive too
    electric heavy hard rock in asylum
    bid to keep in energy and industry
    still loving every minute of it
    ticket to destination heartbreak
    who wants to live forever loverboy?
    the show must go on killer queen
    my best friend, somebody to love
    dressed to thrills in the night
    animalize forever in crazy nights
    midnight crystal knightix cruelty
    revenge on day of the innocent
    just the facts in the naked city
    is that you almost human?
    life in hand, all american man




    Submitted on 2009-05-13 13:15:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      red,
    i just read your comment on my poem "impossiblismix" made back on the 5th month of 2009.i've just gotten back to the site, and am preparing to submit new experiments.the title of my new next one is"funny on fire".i'll get back to you and check out your page.
    sickly
    | Posted on 2011-10-27 00:00:00 | by sickly | [ Reply to This ]
      To be all together truthful...your style of writing is definitely an acquired taste. I'm not tryna make fun of you, just saying that in my honest opinion. I wouldn't give it $5.000. As for the actual contest. Well, that depends on the judges taste in poetry. I've seen slam poets with poetry that hundreds and thousands of people love lose in a poetry contest to a paper poet with an original style. So best of luck to you either way.

    SPIT FROM YOUR SPINE
    red
    | Posted on 2009-05-13 00:00:00 | by red_summer | [ Reply to This ]


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