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    dots Submission Name: Kaleidescopesdots
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    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.82 - 647/1087/624
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    dotsKaleidescopesdots
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    Kaleidoscopes closing in
    Until you're diamonds, stars, stripes, getting thin
    And my hands close on the edges of
    The heartbeat frame of your face expression

    You are too lovely for a song, too fine for every line
    "You are wonder-wonderful" everyone says
    And my eyes focus on those hands of yours
    As they're ta-touching mine

    Everyone will say we are so pretty pretty perfect
    "You're so wonder-wonderful"
    They will say of us, just the two of us
    And we will be, I know it

    And my eyes focus on those hands of yours
    As they're touching mine
    You've got me dreaming in kaleidescopes
    And I'm stars, diamonds, stripes

    You are too lovely for a song, too fine for every line
    You are keeping time on my beating heart





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