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    dots Submission Name: come get medots
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    Author: joezwells
    Elite Ratio:    3.81 - 64/78/54
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    looking in your eyes
    my hearts frozen in time
    light leaking through me
    amazed that your mine

    smiles i cant hide
    the warmth i feel inside
    days are too short
    spending with you, theres not enough time

    you make me so happy
    i love to dream of you
    trying to express what i feel
    no matter what i do, you still have no clue

    i tell you everything
    and you listen so well
    you said you'd always be there
    and on this thought i dwell

    im scared to let you in
    but even more afraid if i dont
    i dont want you to go
    with every word said, i know you wont

    so come get me baby
    im not going anywhere
    i feel like im floating
    so come pull me near




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      aww this is adorable i believe its the first post i've read from you that wasn't depressing or lonely this is nice .... its good to go out of your confurt zone and write things you normally wouldn't. Out of all 110 posts of mine i believe 5 of them give or take a few are "Love" related... nevertheless this is very nice!

    Jackz
    | Posted on 2009-06-08 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
      O...M...G...WOW that was awesome I still can't believe that my bfffl just wrote a love poem about a boy. Do you realize that you love him? That poem says everything to me and you finally let someone in, thats crazy, but awesome.
    Love ya
    | Posted on 2009-05-16 00:00:00 | by captureyourself | [ Reply to This ]


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