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Stanger beside me

Author: aletha_409
ASL Info:    19/F/Kansas
Elite Ratio:    4.41 - 34 /41 /11
Words: 190
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Stanger beside me

You look at me with
eyes that stare into
the depths of my soul,
and see a reflection
of your pain.

We talk and say
without words
that which is
far beyond anything
we have uttered.

I tell you things
I cannot share and
you spoon feed me
what you think I
want to hear.

The agonizing torment
or knowing that I mean
less than nothing
to you, but being
here anyway.

You will lie to my face
you'll shove me to the side
you can pretend all you want
(for my sake, of course)
that we're not playing a
horrible farce of friendship;
but I know that it's all an act
and i just want the diversion to end
because I know that when it's all
said and done, I'll be the winner
of an empty place where these
memories reside. And just when
I get to the point of leaving,

You look at me with
eyes that stare into
the depths of my soul,
and I want to fix you.
Even if it means
breaking myself.

Submitted on 2009-05-16 11:57:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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