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    dots Submission Name: The way we livedots
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    Author: wizardmaster
    ASL Info:    2314/girl/China
    Elite Ratio:    4.09 - 7/7/21
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotsThe way we livedots
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    The way we are
    is not enough for peace.
    The way we are behaving,
    will not get what we want.
    Treat everyone as an equal,
    if you wish for peace,
    love
    and
    a place where future generations
    will walk the earth.
    we must learn to cope with nature,
    and it's natural givings.
    We must not think we are
    the superior species,
    because without the other animals,
    our world would collapse.
    People everywhere
    are suffering
    from the way we treat the earth.
    Do not think anything is ever-lasting.
    That is nonsense.




    Submitted on 2009-05-16 12:22:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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