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    dots Submission Name: Something to Nothingdots
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    Author: blankscreen
    ASL Info:    22/f/NY
    Elite Ratio:    5.57 - 222/196/163
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 728
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    dotsSomething to Nothingdots
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    There's a space out there
    And a time
    Where smiles so solemny placed
    on forgotten faces
    finally reach forth
    in bursts of forever

    Theres a time somewhere
    That's not too far down the road
    Where for an instant,
    A splitting instant,
    The sun shines once more

    Theres a time where forevers turn to nothings
    Because reality is too strong to conquer
    Nothings turn into forevers
    Where little things grow bigger
    When the bigger things are forgotten

    And that empty hole you left in my heart turns to rot
    Because theres a time out there
    Theres a space out there
    Where every stranger is a friend
    And every friend makes a smile
    Last forever




    Submitted on 2009-05-16 17:40:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I found you by a random jump! I like your verse, but I have to get offline in a minute. I'll come back in a few days and do comments.
    | Posted on 2009-06-15 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]


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