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    dots Submission Name: Bring Yourselfdots
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    Author: wanderingpoet16
    Elite Ratio:    5.68 - 157/177/55
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsBring Yourselfdots
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    When you leave to love
    You've got to bring yourself along
    Paint a picturesque horizon on your hands
    And hope they hold

    Hope and hold,
    Follow through
    Pose the other to pursue
    The death-defying dive
    Into the depths of you

    Worlds apart collide, arrive
    Were once opposed, diverging lines
    And how they met, to coincide
    Now juxtaposed, they intertwine

    Around the self and thus became
    The entity from whence love came
    And breathed into this fragile frame
    That we must not exist as two



    But one




    Submitted on 2009-05-16 20:04:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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