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    dots Submission Name: The rantings of A growing minddots
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    Author: LiChan
    ASL Info:    18/f/in my reality
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 9/6/12
    Words: 371
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Society
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    dotsThe rantings of A growing minddots
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    Music is the only thing that matters anymore, the only thing that is powerful enough that could reach out thoughts.

    But how are we to sing out thoughts, when we haven't generally thought for a long time.

    What is creative about us, when it is all the same around us?

    Yes, I do know my thoughts, and I have learned them well. But how am I to write them down, when there is no way to guide me?

    I see the past and I marvel at it, I can't seem to move people quiet like that, but I guess I have to try.

    Because Some has to start writing first, so that others will read what that person writes, and then those people will write. And slowly the world would learn.

    But it is hard.

    Because the world ahs changed from a mysitical world...We are losing more and more each and everyday. No one really wants to find a way...A peaceful way, to live on this planet. We all want it for ourselves, because we are a greedy race in general....No we aren't, however the ones in power, often are.

    This is a scarey place to watch, a scarey world. We no longer care as much, my generation, we really don't. We don't think, we let others do the thinking, its kind of sad. Because the ones before us fought so hard for their right to think, but now it is going away. We don't seem to need that right because well, we don't think anyway.

    Almost everyone from past generations thought about what they were doing, almost. However, now it is almost everyone doesn't think.

    Heck even I have a hard time finding the thoughts that are inside me. It is like there is something blocking them. And I hate it. I know there is thoughts somewhere, Is it so hard to reach for them.

    However I will reach, I will keep reaching too, because I am sure that the answer is there, waiting.

    Waiting to open my mind, and let my thought flow out.

    And then, the world will see, and yes it will learn




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      such thoughts as these come from a very pure place, one that so many try to grasp... and realise in some way. this humbles me, how far-reaching and universal this is.

    you struck a chime with me, yes you did.

    bless.
    | Posted on 2009-05-18 00:00:00 | by meoww | [ Reply to This ]


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