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    dots Submission Name: lovedots
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    Author: ikram
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 194
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    I know you're scared, baby
    But, you gotta give me everything, yeah

    Let me be the one who can take you
    From all the things you've seen
    And if you trust in me
    I can be there for anything you need

    And give it all to me, baby
    Don't you run from me, baby
    I'll give you every little piece of me
    No, I won't leave out a thing, 'cuz I

    I know you've seen a lot of things in your life
    It got you feeling like this can't be right
    But, I won't hurt you, I'm down for you, baby

    I know you've seen a lot of things in your life
    It got you feeling like this can't be right
    But, I won't hurt you, I'm down for you, baby

    Let me show you, love can be easy
    If you just let it be
    Nothing is promised, but I believe if
    If you give it everything, trust

    I'll give you everything that I've got
    I won't stop until you get it right
    All the trust and all the love
    You know we got a lot, baby




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