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    dots Submission Name: What ive done for youdots
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    Author: Crystal15
    ASL Info:    19/f/sc
    Elite Ratio:    0.65 - 1/2/25
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsWhat ive done for youdots
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    Every tear that falls from my eyes is for you
    Every drop of blood that drips from my heart is for you
    Every cut of my skin is for you
    Every scream that come out of my mouth is for you
    Every scar on my body is for you
    Everything i have,Everything i do well guess what its all for for you
    So believe me now when i say theres nothing here but a broken heart and shattered dreams




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