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    dots Submission Name: Some more ramblings from an awakening minddots
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    Author: LiChan
    ASL Info:    18/f/in my reality
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 9/6/12
    Words: 235
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Misc
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    dotsSome more ramblings from an awakening minddots
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    I was told that some thoughts I get come from a very pure place, and I guess to some the is the truth. However I find that when I watch the place I am in, it isn't very pure, there is taint in it. Nothing can be pure once it has been tainted that is how life is. And the road to getting to that place I was at, is very tainted indeed. But that does not mean it is a worthless thing.

    Taint is needed. I believe, people need to start realizing that before us as a race can really move on. No we do not have to taint everything that we touch, but we have to realize that the pure we think we need, will only hold us back.

    Childern have that purity, but as we grow older, we lose parts of it. We can't help it. Life makes us lose that. But to try and force ourselves to remain pure is going against growing.

    When people learn to mix purity and taintiness together, they will start to be able to have wonderfull thoughts that just flow out of them. I think that what I am trying to say is not turning out very well, but I will keep writing about this idea untill I can get it right. Because I think this is something we all need to know.




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