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    dots Submission Name: The Good Stuffdots
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    Author: kession
    ASL Info:    18~M~ok
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 115/156/63
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 836
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1078



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    dotsThe Good Stuffdots
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    A blonde bombshell,
    Wrapped in a nice little package,
    You're so wonderful and beautiful,
    You make me so happy.

    From the moment I saw you,
    I knew I had to make you mine,
    I just want to hold you,
    And be with you all the time.

    I love how when we kiss,
    No matter when it is,
    You always seem to have,
    The softest sweetest lips.

    You need a man who truly cares,
    Someone who will treat you right,
    Someone you can run to when you're scared,
    Someone who will hold you and make everything alright.

    I just want you to see,
    That everything I do is from the heart,
    And how good things could be,
    If a relationship did start.

    I just want you to like me,
    As much as I like you,
    You say give you time,
    So that's what I will do.

    Please don't keep me waiting,
    For too long,
    Cause I'd hate to look up one day,
    And find that you are gone.




    Submitted on 2009-05-18 17:30:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I enjoyed reading this poem. I think it's sweet and sad when you like someone but you don't think that they like you back. The sweet part is when you tell them that you'll wait for them to like you back. I absolutely can feel your pain, because I'm in the same situation. There's a guy that I really like but he doesn't seem to like me. I told him that I would let him figure out what he wants and/or needs and I'll be waiting for him whenever he needs a shoulder to cry on. I think that he's not going to need one anytime soon, though. I will still be waiting for him, like a loser, because I know that he doesn't really like me that way. I'm not his "type." You know, I'm rambling on now, and I'm sorry. I enjoyed it, end of story.
    Angel
    | Posted on 2009-05-19 00:00:00 | by bubble_popper15 | [ Reply to This ]


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