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    dots Submission Name: Deceptiondots
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    Author: SuperMonkey
    ASL Info:    17/Femeesexual/Alabama
    Elite Ratio:    1.03 - 2/5/27
    Words: 340
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 33
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 2397



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    Verse 1:
    Held at the throat by a pang of conscience
    Lying here in a pool of my own regret
    Clutching at the fragments of a broken dream
    Slipping through my hands like a silhouette

    Bridge:
    You know
    You
    Did this to me and
    You know
    You
    Will never understand

    Chorus:
    I think it's time
    To say goodbye
    After all you've done is lie
    And now I feel,
    Yes my friend, At long last we've reached the end.
    You know it's ended.
    I've pretended
    Until my will became undone
    And now I know that it's over,
    But it should never have begun.

    Verse 2:
    Sitting in the dark like I always had been
    Thought I had a chance to find the light
    Stabbing at your heart with shattered fantasies
    In a desperate pledge to win this fight

    Bridge:
    I know
    You
    Did this to me and
    I know
    You
    Will never understand

    Chorus:
    I think it's time
    To say goodbye
    After all you've done is lie
    And now I feel,
    Yes my friend,
    At long last we've reached the end.
    You know it's ended.
    I've pretended
    Until my will became undone
    And now I know that it's over,
    But it should never have begun.

    You drew my blood with sharpened deceit
    Love is wrong and revenge is sweet
    And now my soul is incomplete
    And it's all down to you cause

    Bridge:
    You know
    You
    Did this to me and
    I know
    I
    Will never understand

    Chorus:
    I think it's time
    To say goodbye
    After all you've done is lie
    And now I feel,
    Yes my friend,
    At long last we've reached the end.
    You know it's ended.
    I've pretended
    Until my will became undone
    And now I know that it's over,
    But it should never have begun.

    Lieskill
    Should never have begun
    Killlies
    Should never have begun

    Lieskill the trust
    That builds the love up from the dust
    Killlies that come
    To take love that should have begun




    Submitted on 2009-05-20 20:12:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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