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i've begun counting your lies...
and i said:
if we get to ten, somebody dies.
for what you did to my heart?
i'll cut the throat of this love.
i'll fucking rip it apart.
congratulations, you won the prize.
so grovel now like i did for you, and
"swallow, swallow, swallow your pride."
| I like this. Its short and to the point. Like the guy ruined you and now you want tog et revenge on him, by making hi swallow his pride and realize the fault of his ways. I like how there are two stanzas too, breaking up the ideas perfectly. Anyways, great job.|
|| Posted on 2009-05-22 00:00:00 | by UnderlinedInRed | [ Reply to This ] |