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A what?

Author: MyWorld
ASL Info:    21/M/IN
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All alone, one of a kind..
All on my own, no one by my side..

**I was a little fucked up when I wrote this.**

A what?

I hope you don't flip a gasket over that shit but i'm askin
If you could mask it when I pass this
and you get your ass kicked
by sorrow and sadness
'Cause tomorrow i'll clash with
Dreams and Ideals
Things that in my eyes seem real
Denial and the everturning wheel
An endeavor to cure the yearning I feel
And with whatever spurn you might feel
Know I'm goin' for my hopes and dreams, my zeal
Time heals, all wounds,
but if eyes can kill, I'm doomed
cause all i see from you is betrayal
and I want you to say you'll
come to me the day we'll
reunite, and when you see me you might
gaze upon a star, or lay eyes on the poor
so, why not be all we can be tonight girl

I've tried but my mind can't seem to find just what I'm
Looking for, and what's more is I've noticed that I'm
Severly impatient, a disgrace, and can't even stand the way that I say shit
Time to face it, I've wasted too much time with complacency
My mind is a waste to me, it's distaste for me
Has led it to hastefully
Be done and away with me
erased, I'll be
Betrayed, never should've stayed, you shoulda kept me away from me
laid, I'll be, to rest with my hands on my breasts, the fate of me
is dust, destined to be betrayed by one of me
I'm gonna be dead either way, ya see
So, fuck all your cautions, and false thoughts, my loss is naught
I toss my old roster cause the costs are too high
You're lost 'cause all too often, I'm scoffin 'em but it's all cause I knew I

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  Bravo! I looked to find something no one has commented upon.. as I usually do when someone takes the time to read something of mine. And I must say this was a wonderful find. It put me in the shoes of someone else. Time and time again I search for things that I can take into my own life. This is something I can surely learn from. Kudos
| Posted on 2010-07-26 00:00:00 | by DearlyDeparted | [ Reply to This ]

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